My heart as fragile as glass, my mind as stubborn as a rock. You hurt me time and time again, "please... please" I say "I wish you could feel my pain." You tell me your sorry to only turn around and do it again, leaving me no choice but to leave. My stubborn mind forcing me back to you moments later. maybe the pain is the only thing keeping me alive. Maybe I fight for the pain in hopes to come out brand new... again and again I break each time loosing all my pride while you sit on your so called throne watching me weep. You put yourself on a cloud as you watch me broken, crying, hoping for more.. something more than pain and agony

what should I add or change?

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My heart as fragile as glass, my mind  as stubborn as a rock. You hurt me time and time again, "please... please" I say "I wish you could feel my pain." You tell me your sorry to only turn around and do it again, leaving me no choice but to leave. My stubborn mind forcing me back to you moments later. maybe the pain is the only thing keeping me alive. Maybe I fight for the pain in hopes to come out brand new... again and again I break each time loosing all my pride while you sit on your so called throne watching me weep. You put yourself on a cloud as you watch me  broken, crying, hoping for more.. something more than pain and agony

what should I add or change?

Alexis1415 · Answer

Wow jayden, this is deeeep and relatable to people around. This is great, I love it and am proud of you. "what should I add or change?" I don't think you need to add or change anything as a matter of fact. <3

ZdaddYjayjay · Answer

@alexis1415 wrote:

Wow jayden, this is deeeep and relatable to people around. This is great, I love it and am proud of you. "what should I add or change?" I don't think you need to add or change anything as a matter of fact. <3

I really appreciate that, thank you for your opinion

Alexis1415 · Answer

@zdaddyjayjay wrote:

@alexis1415 wrote:

Wow jayden, this is deeeep and relatable to people around. This is great, I love it and am proud of you. "what should I add or change?" I don't think you need to add or change anything as a matter of fact. <3

I really appreciate that, thank you for your opinion

Ofc

Sharkattack123 · Answer

Ooo this good

Sharkattack123 · Answer

Keep it up

Krissy525 · Answer

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Krissy525 · Answer

@krissy525 wrote:

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im here if you ever need someone to talk to

ZdaddYjayjay · Answer

@krissy525 wrote:

This is great. It's very relatable. I would love to see more of your work. Kepp it up!

im here if you ever need someone to talk to

Thank you I appreciate this like sooo much

ZdaddYjayjay · Answer

@sharkattack123 wrote:

Keep it up

Thank youuuu

Krissy525 · Answer

@zdaddyjayjay wrote:

@krissy525 wrote:

This is great. It's very relatable. I would love to see more of your work. Kepp it up!

im here if you ever need someone to talk to

Thank you I appreciate this like sooo much

np