Question

A poem I don't have a name for it so feel free to recommend one (Recommendations with the most medals will be the name)
You broke me to pieces posed me as a threat
Left me to rot away with a needle and a thread
Tried to seal away the broken pieces
Trying to cooperate with my demons
It's too much to ask but would it kill you to apologize
I'm just a guy trying to find the right way in life I was traumatized
At a young age that is I am 18 now but I still cry
Nothing ever feels right on the inside
Always on the defensive because I'm scared one day I might lose this fight
Trying to maintain a life but you took me by surprise
Hurting in ways you wouldn't understand
You didn't sympathize
My situation just got harder am I gonna die?
How can you ask for my trust when all you do is lie?

Sorry that it's so depression :c

Answer 1

Nice,good work

Answer 2

Name: Dark

Answer 3

Broken

Answer 4

Gone for the namee ig idk

Answer 5

lol thanks guys

Answer 6

hey that is really good

Answer 7

Itz good🤑💵

Answer 8

Thanks I appreciate it I wrote it after having a hard time

Answer 9

You know being 18 really took a bite on my life and I am just trying to trust my decisions more but with anxiety it's kinda hard not to be a little anxious about what I am doing like I really don't wanna fall off the thread I'm balancing on

Answer 10

Best poem I heard

Answer 11

😇

Answer 12

Ah thanks man i appreciate your feedback

Answer 13

Yeah

Answer 14

ik how yall feel

Answer 15

Yep life 💀 me

Answer 16

Yuhhhh

Answer 17

Name: Crying with My Demons

Answer 18

thats really good

Answer 19

i like your poem it look like u put alot of effort into it!

Answer 20

You know being 18 really took a bite on my life and I am just trying to trust my decisions more but with anxiety it's kinda hard not to be a little anxious about what I am doing like I really don't wanna fall off the thread I'm balancing on

Answer 21

Nice!