Here is a poem I wrote.
Please give your honest opinion:
Plus, I don't have a name for it yet, leave suggestions down below please:

Question

Olive2006 · Answer

Tell me why, I fall for her
Her hair so glossy
She can be a little bossy
Loving her is all I need
She is like a beautiful waterfall

Tell me why, I can’t stop thinking about
Her, it's always a heartbreak with 
Someone else, its nothing I can’t
Solve falling for her

Tell me why her heart was so
loveable, always loving her was a losing 
game, but I always loved her

Sailor · Answer

Nice job, I like it!

Olive2006 · Answer

@sailor wrote:

Nice job, I like it!

thank you

Sailor · Answer

No problem.

Scorpion13 · Answer

It's nice

Olive2006 · Answer

@scorpion13 wrote:

It's nice

thank you

Scorpion13 · Answer

@olive2006 wrote:

@scorpion13 wrote:

It's nice

thank you

Why don't u name the poem "her"

Olive2006 · Answer

@scorpion13 wrote:

@olive2006 wrote:

@scorpion13 wrote:

It's nice

thank you

Why don't u name the poem "her"

I didn't think of a name yet but I may name it that; thank you for the suggestion

Scorpion13 · Answer

@olive2006 wrote:

@scorpion13 wrote:

@olive2006 wrote:

@scorpion13 wrote:

It's nice

thank you

Why don't u name the poem "her"

I didn't think of a name yet but I may name it that; thank you for the suggestion

Yw