Question

"I wish"
Can't cope
Can't cry
My emotions won't work
I'm looking for the peace
That I can't find
I've lost it
And I can't go anywhere for comfort
It doesn't feel the same
I'm alone now
So I guess I'm ok
I just wish
That I could turn back time
And enjoy the things I lost
I can't say sorry
Because my mind won't allow me
But I guess things happen
For a reason
But yet I still bring myself
To say sorry
But I already know
That it won't fix the broken mirror
It won't fix my mind
I just wish today never happened

Answer 1

Great kaven! You did awesome.. Please do more.

Answer 2

Thanks ;-;

Answer 3

do you take constructive criticism?

Answer 4

i didnt really write this for criticism i wrote it to vent out ;-;

Answer 5

nice good job!

Answer 6

Yes, that's what poem are about to me, only it just required punctuations. But overall it's an amazing poem.

Answer 7

nice job kokushibo

Answer 8

I relate to this a little too much. Keep up amazing work tho<3333

Answer 9

great job

Answer 10

thanks

Answer 11

this is really good... if you ever need to talk to vent or rant im here if you need advice or someone to just listen to you lemme kno

Answer 12

np

Answer 13

ofc <3

Answer 14

This is so beautiful and heartfelt!😩☺️

Answer 15

thanks .-.

Answer 16

i felt this good job

Answer 17

Cool

Answer 18

GOOD JOB