Question

Could you guys tell me what you think of my story?
https://www.wattpad.com/1211873426-two-lovers-chapter-1

Answer 1

What the hell is a trimester?

Answer 2

It is a 12 week semester. And there is three of them.

Answer 3

its nice

Answer 4

thank you

Answer 5

OMG i love it you did good

Answer 6

it is not even halfway done but I just wanted to see if people it so far.

Answer 7

I think it is pretty good i think you should publish it

Answer 8

thank you

Answer 9

it is pretty good

Answer 10

👍🏼👍🏼👌🏼

Answer 11

blocked dang i was excited to read it D:

Answer 12

It has been a stressful day, high school is hard and I just want to give up. I know I can't if I want to achieve my goal of becoming a artist and doctor. I just don't understand why I need U.S History for an artist or even a doctor. It doesn't make sense. Before my last trimester started I was in a class with one of my two best friends. Now that my last trimester started I have one class with my bestie, Ari, which is orchestra. Its not bad we chat more than I do with my other best friend, Zoe, from last trimester. Now although I chat with Ari more I still wish Zoe and I were in the same class. Ari and I always take walks, talk about our friends turning into zombies and how I always save them. It was Saturday, so I texted Ari to see if she wanted to go for a walk, but it turned out she was hanging out with her boyfriend. So I texted Zoe, instead to see if she wanted to go for a walk and she said, "No I am on a date with Noli". I knew who Noli was and I just thought she could have done better but I just said, "Okay, maybe another day". Since Ari and her boyfriend, Chris got together I new it was meant to be because they were so perfect. Then I found out Zoe was dating Noli and I became jealous. I don't know why I thought everything was fine but my body told me something different. I saw Zoe in the Hall on Monday and she looked so happy giving Noli a hug. I felt like I was going to die inside, but I just said, "Hi" instead. Then went straight to class. When I was in class, I couldn't stop thinking of Zoe hugging him. Thirty minutes into class and I raised my hand to go to the bathroom. I quickly walked to the bathroom and started crying. I don't know why I started crying, but I couldn't stop. I pulled my phone out and told Ari to come to the second floor bathroom. When I heard her voice enter the bathroom I let her into the stall I was in and I told her everything. She comforted and told me, "I probably had a crush on her". I never thought about that because I never looked at girls like that, I just liked boys. So I told her, "I know I can't be with her because she is with Noli and my parents said two girls can never be together. She told me it was perfectly fine for me to be with another girl and you are right that you can't break up her relationship because she is so happy. I agreed. So instead I said goodbye to Ari and we went back to our classes.

Answer 13

Dang that is a fcking good story you should publish it when it is fully done