Is this good for creative writing.....( ͡ಠ ʖ̯ ͡ಠ) The trees, dying from the cold, slowly going to sleep, waved their final goodbyes, as if they were putting on a farewell show, let their golden, maroon, and sage colored leaves, dance to the ground. The Trees are sad as each leaf says goodbye. Their friends dance in their honor. The leaves are in grief, for they must say goodbye to their trees. Their homes. Their lives.
I think it's really good. I feel that it's too much of a sudden ending, I feel that there should be more, other than that, pretty good.
Oh I am not done yet, but tysm!!!!
I like the flow a lot although I the first sentence is really long and you should divide it. The passion really shows here and feel free to add more and polish this.
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