Question

(The first part of my story what do yall think?)
Five years ago, It all seemed like some silly game. Like a game that I could play for hours without getting bored, you were like a drug and I was addicted. It was love at first sight and now here we are five years later still so in love, you are now the father to 2 beautiful baby boys, and we live in our dream house the one we thought of on our second date. here we are five years later still so in love. I look down at the golden-encrusted picture frame sitting on the hospital drawer next to me that holds the picture of us on our wedding day, I pick it up and hold it close to my heart, and a tear drops from my swollen eyes "I'm sorry our time is cut short" I whisper softly to the picture. "I love you, Michele" 

Answer 1

Awww, I love it. The last part is sad though. ;-;