Question

please help me topic is Why schools should have better lunches

Answer 1

please help me

Answer 2

im sorry but this really isnt my area of smartness sorry

Answer 3

@quicksilver0125 please don’t reply if u do not have an answer or aren’t helping with the question, thanks 🙏🏽

Answer 4

Ok all you need to do is come up for a reason right? @arieonna

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yes but i have to fallow all the destructions i posted 2 screen chot of the full assighnment

Answer 6

I see.

Answer 7

oops i ment 3 screen shots

Answer 8

Ok, so what is a topic sentence that starts why schools should have better lunches that’s the first thing it says to do right.

Answer 9

What can you use to begin your sentence off with?

Answer 10

Schools lunches need to change because their milk taste like cardboard and there fries are to soft

Answer 11

school lunches are poisiones one time my milk and mayonays was chunkey

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no cap

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n the pizza aint pizza they needa get real food salad is only good thing

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one time i had there lucky charms and in side my breakfast i had a rock

Answer 15

NAHHHHHHH

Answer 16

That is sounding good to start with, Do u know how to use transitions? And if u do since I’m guessing you do here is an example:

Schools lunches need to change because their milk taste like cardboard and there fries are to soft

Transition to something like say

Since their milk taste like cardboard and then suggest something els

Answer 17

I meant to put quotes around
“Schools lunches need to change because their milk taste like cardboard and there fries are to soft”

Answer 18

for the transition can i say since the school milk taste like card board they should serve orange juice instead

Answer 19

but its free u get what ya pay for

Answer 20

That’s what they said. Don’t comment unless u are helping.

Answer 21

THE SCHOOL ORANGE JUICE IS SO SOUR EWWW U REMINDED ME ITS POISNN

Answer 22

what

Answer 23

then what can replace milk

Answer 24

Suggesting something better is actually good to do.

Answer 25

ok and when it ask for a complete sentence can i put do to Schools serving really soft fries and milk that taste like card board they should upgrade their menu and make their fries crunchy and not soft and take milk out of their menu and put orange juice instead and if they want to serve pizza they should order little cissers or pizza ranch

Answer 26

Well suggesting other things that everyone might wanna eat would be er also not just u but if this is an assignment then sure yea you can put that.

Answer 27

k what about it wanting begin with a topic sentence that introduce some thing you can give an exanded illiustration of in 3 sentence what do i do there

Answer 28

Um ok let me see, the illustration part basically wants u to explain the reason why in three sentences. So tell me why u want to change school lunches what made u pick that topic?

Answer 29

Explain it in three sentences.

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well they don't check their food or taste it to see if it is good or not they take their fries out to soon they do taste like they are not done fully and last they should also add some thing non milk just incase some one is latos and tollerent

Answer 31

Good, yea they do only cook it. So put those all into three separate sentences.

Answer 32

ok and then After the topic sentence, write a body that includes an extended example in at least three supporting sentences. what do i do there

Answer 33

Yes! Do that.

Answer 34

what do i do when it says that

Answer 35

School lunches are just straight up garbage the food taste like cardboard and the milk is always spoiled its gross

Answer 36

next how do i follow my body with a clincher

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I think its saying put all of them together in a paragraph because if those were the only thing you had to do then you are supposed to create a paragraph and put them together.

Answer 38

Hen it says write a body it means paragraph

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When*

Answer 40

They want you to put those three sentences into a paragraph. The ones you typed on here.

Answer 41

thanks so much i finally finished the essay

Answer 42

Your welcome!