Question

I wrote a fathers day poem dedicated to my father who had no presence in my growing up:(

Answer 1

afraid to delete you, you stuck in my phone
Too scared i might miss you, im always alone
a smiles my cloak, but inside i'm broke
they all seem to leave when you need them most

You never were here to watch as i've grown
The sorrys i've heard they've gotten so old
If I have a warm heart, then why am i cold?
If I'm so strong, why can't i hold this load?

You don't know what I had to go through, the things i had to do without you.
I wake up, never hit the snooze, i check the time and then i check the news.. as i tie the noose that i'll never use..

You see the years without you were easy, but i never knew that every year on june 18th, i'll feel the pain and misery of thinking of what we coulda made maybe a history, father and son my insides shook me...you never wanted me or my 9 siblings onw brother 8 sisters, you wanted a life we didnt need, a life that took you away from your whole family.

I grew up with no ears to hear me but had eyes on me
People who watch 24 7, but wont hear what you say
Claim your just a insane little patient in need
The ones who turned you to a liar do your lying every single time you say you're okay.

I'm sorry pops for following your footsteps, uncle got me out though with the last of our money which i was supposed to use for college..
R.i.p curtis rojo bermudez (dad)

Answer 2

Love it love how u are expressing how u feel

Answer 3

The feelings in this is real. I am amazed by this. Im sorry this is how you felt.

Answer 4

I'm sorry but I think it was a good one

Answer 5

This made me cry I just am so happy I'm not the only one who feels this way

Answer 6

This was good keep it up and please tag me in more of your work I would love to see them.

Answer 7

he went for milk frfr

Answer 8

I love love love this poem

Answer 9

relatable

Answer 10

Keep up the good work my dude.