Question

Shattered Whispers

In the dim light where shadows creep,
She stood, a specter in my dreams,
Eyes like burning coals, secrets to keep,
Her laughter danced on the moonlit streams.

Once, we were woven in threads of gold,
Promises whispered with breaths that collide,
But time unraveled what fate had controlled,
And love turned ripened fruits into scars deep inside.

I walked through fields where the roses bled,
Each petal fell like hopes on the floor,
Her touch was fire; now it feels like lead,
With every memory that aches to explore.

"Stay," I begged as the twilight sighed,
While demons warned me of paths dearly priced;
Yet I anchored my heart on a stormy tide—
A ship so fragile could never suffice.

In the recess of nights cloaked in despair,
I traced her silhouette sketched against pain.
How could such beauty leave marks so unfair?
Like bloodied footprints upon stained terrain.

She wore affection like armor of thorn—
Each tale wrapped in laughter had knives sewn tight,
A paradox wrapped in soft fabric worn;
Love's darkest jest concealed under starlight.

How small I felt beneath her towering grace,
As she lingered just out of reach and away;
Caught in her orbit—a monumental place—
Where shadows wove stories and light went astray.

So here I stand against winds that can bite—
The ghost of her warmth buried deep in my chest;
A hollow reminder of lost sweet delight;
Every moment cherished becomes a cruel jest.

I sought for answers she swallowed whole—
Wishing to stitch together love from the seams.
But silence unrolled its consuming toll—
That haunting echo froze night’s delicate dreams.

Yearning for solace in whispers long gone—
But each breath is weighted with sorrow and woe;
The bond we crafted was sharp as a fawn;
Fragile as morning fog kissed by the glow.

Consequences weave a tapestry grim;
Still amongst ashes where embers must fade,
A flicker remains—a flame stitched within—
Of longing that holds as daylight invades.

So let it be told amidst ages of time:
In wanting her deep came destruction’s embrace;
What once felt sublime fell steep into grime—
Love can be beautiful but also misplaced.

Answer 1

girl i love this poem it is so heart tuching and good at the same time this is something tht i would read over agian

Answer 2

yh

Answer 3

dude I rlly like this..

Answer 4

nice

Answer 5

❤️

Answer 6

wow this is soooo good !

Answer 7

Ai?

Answer 8

I think this looks rlly good! gj ^ _ ^

Answer 9

Smash poem

Answer 10

Mmmm my gf once checked out AI with me
We were playing around with it and turns out that it could write poems
U just describe what you want and it writes
And I recognized some lines
They are like the same ones lol
I mean idk if u rlly thought of that but it just sounds the same alot

One thing abt ai is that no matter how different u will ask it to write
It will still sound very artificial and use some words from other poems...

Answer 11

Ah I see
Just the first line was like the same from all the quotes I've seen in ai

Answer 12

Oh cool
Ur other quotes ah whatever

Answer 13

Looks nice.

Answer 14

spooky

Answer 15

Me and my friends wanted to write a song and we decided to use AI... And what I noticed is that ur second poem was formed just like are 1st chorus
So bet grol don't lieeee
We all know!

Answer 16

If you use AI just say you use AI 🤣
it's not bad to use it lol

Answer 17

but I don't use AI......ask all my friends they will tell you the same thing

Answer 18

You don't see feeling in there lol

Answer 19

Next time you write a poem add emotions feelings by it sounds artificial

And it's OK to use ai... just say it
Or change the words lol