Question

I know I made a mistake,
But that doesn't change how I feel about you.
You know how I feel,
Everything I told you was true.

Over the past three years,
You've engraved your name into my heart,
Deeper than I ever thought possible.
I don't even know where to start.

I dream about you,
And you just don't seem to understand.
I'm flying around like a bird,
Trying to find a safe place to land.

Soaring up in the sky,
Waiting to see that light.
The light that's the opening up your heart,
So I can get down from this suffocating height.

Please forgive me
For all of the wrong that I have done.
Everyone makes mistakes.
I wish I had none.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

reading this making me tear up and think about pasts memories this is very good

Answer 3

this makes me so sad and emotional because I understand every emotion in this, it's amazing! I love it.

Answer 4

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Answer 5

yeah i feel you like it is tough when your trying to make things right and get all those feelings out, especially when you have made a mistake that you can't take back. like the way you have written it shows how deep your emotions run like your trying to reach someone, but you don't know if they will understand or even willing to hear you out. you know, it's not easy putting yourself out there like that, saying you're sorry and hoping someone will see the truth behind your actions. like i can sense vulnerability in your words, like you're just trying to explain how much this person means to you, even though everything feels a little bit lost right now. i think your looking for a way to let them know no matter what happened, you still care. and honestly, i get it. mistakes are part of being human, and owning them up can be hard, but it's the first step in making things right, no matter how messy it feels. you're reaching out, wanting to be understood, wanting them to know you're not perfect but that you're still here, still feeling all this for them. that's real, and i think that's what matters most is being genuine, even when it's tough. and if i have to rate this poem i give it a 8/10. it is because of the Emotion, Imagery and the Honesty in this poem.💖🕊️🫶

Answer 6

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Answer 7

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Answer 8

Nice Job

Answer 9

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