Question

Could I get feedback on my research paper?

Answer 1

Honestly, I think it looks good! It's organized, you have your information and shows the links. Good Job!

Answer 2

that's gooddd

Answer 3

Are you getting graded on it?

Answer 4

I think you'll get a good grade on it

Answer 5

You put the words "and" wrongly.

Answer 6

lol

Answer 7

Lol

Answer 8

I would add one more paragraph to summary. Ending in a quote does add depth but also makes it so you leave it open ended. Either summarize the quote and what it means to you as your final paragraph or summarize the whole piece as a whole and I think this is fantastic.

Answer 9

So a conclusion paragraph?

Answer 10

I was more so saying how open ended it’s left off. It’s really well writen I just think ending the piece end in your own words is better then a quote

Answer 11

Sounds like every English teacher ever lol

Answer 12

I’m saying leave the quote in there and write a conclusion on top of it. If you have the rubric standards already then those no need I guess

Answer 13

Gabriel Wheeler
English 10, Period 7
4/17/25


Air Force Aerospace Propulsion
A good career to consider is Air Force Aerospace Propulsion. What they do is plan, organize, and direct aerospace propulsion maintenance activities; diagnose engine problems, including the fuel, oil, electrical, engine airflow systems; remove defective components, install serviceable machinery; supervise test runs on repaired engines; analyze and recommend maintenance actions based on need.
There are a few educational requirements for this job. Basic military training takes about 8 weeks, while technical training takes 34-61 days. The tech school is located at Sheppard Airforce Base, Texas. The status upon completion results in Enlisted Airman with credits earned toward Aviation Maintenance Technology. You must be 17-42 years of age, a U.S. citizen, and obtain a qualifying ASVAB score. High School Students may start their application as early as the end of their junior year.
Applicants who are non-graduates or non-alternate credential holders must obtain an AFQT Test score of 65 or higher on the ASVAB. Knowledge of mechanical, hydromechanical, electrical and hydraulic principles. Completion of appropriate Aerospace Propulsion Maintenance courses for specialty, normal color vision, a completion of a current National Agency Check, Local Agency Checks and Credit are also required.
Knowledge is crucial for this position. Knowledge is mandatory of mechanical, hydro mechanical, electrical, and hydraulics principles applying to jet and turboprop engines, and propellers; oil analysis principles; wear metal criteria and guidelines; concepts and application of maintenance directives; using and interpreting diagrams and technical publications; the proper handling, use, disposal of hazardous waste and materials.
The Air Force also has a creed: “I am and American Airman. I am a warrior. I have answered my nations call. I am an American Airman. My mission is to fly, fight, and win. I am faithful to a proud heritage, a tradition of honor, and a legacy of valor, I am an American airman. Guardian of freedom and justice, my nation’s sword and shield, its sentry and avenger. I defend my country with my life. I am an American airman. Wingman, leader, warrior. I will never leave an airman behind, I will never falter, and I will not fail.”
In addition to their creed, they have 3 core values: “‘Integrity first’: An Airman is a person of integrity, courage and conviction. They must be willing to control their impulses and exercise courage, honesty, and accountability in order to do what is right even when no one is looking. ‘Service Before Self’: An Airman’s professional duties take precedence over personal desires. Every Airman is expected to have the discipline to follow rules, exhibit self-control and possess respect for the beliefs, authority and worth of others. ‘Excellence all we Do’: An Airman strives for continual improvement in self and service in order to propel the Air Force further and to achieve greater accomplishment and performance for themselves and their community.
In conclusion, Aerospace Propulsion would be an excellent career choice for people looking for hands on experiences. This is a good job recomendation for young adults looking for a job but struggling to find one.

Works Cited:
Aerospace Propulsion Specialist - U.S. Air Force. Www.airforce.com, www.airforce.com/careers/maintenance-and-repair/aerospace-propulsion.
Aerospace Propulsion Specialist - U.S. Air Force. Www.airforce.com, www.airforce.com/careers/maintenance-and-repair/aerospace-propulsion.
Aerospace Propulsion. 128th Air Refueling Wing, 2020, www.128arw.ang.af.mil/About-Us/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/449968/aerospace-propulsion/ . Accessed 23 Apr. 2025.

Answer 14

I've never seen semicolons used by someone in your grade level like that. Did you use something for those lists? Like an AI?

Answer 15

Just kind of shocked is all

Answer 16

Ah okay. Do you have Google Docs?

Answer 17

Gabriel Wheeler
English 10, Period 7
4/17/25


Air Force Aerospace Propulsion
A good career to consider is Air Force Aerospace Propulsion. What they do is plan, organize, and direct aerospace propulsion maintenance activities; diagnose engine problems, including the fuel, oil, electrical, engine airflow systems; remove defective components, install serviceable machinery; supervise test runs on repaired engines; analyze and recommend maintenance actions based on need.
There are a few educational requirements for this job. Basic military training takes about 8 weeks, while technical training takes 34-61 days. The tech school is located at Sheppard Airforce Base, Texas. The status upon completion results in Enlisted Airman with credits earned toward Aviation Maintenance Technology. You must be 17-42 years of age, a U.S. citizen, and obtain a qualifying ASVAB score. High School Students may start their application as early as the end of their junior year.
Applicants who are non-graduates or non-alternate credential holders must obtain an AFQT Test score of 65 or higher on the ASVAB. Knowledge of mechanical, hydromechanical, electrical and hydraulic principles. Completion of appropriate Aerospace Propulsion Maintenance courses for specialty, normal color vision, a completion of a current National Agency Check, Local Agency Checks and Credit are also required.
Knowledge is crucial for this position. Knowledge is mandatory of mechanical, hydro mechanical, electrical, and hydraulics principles applying to jet and turboprop engines, and propellers; oil analysis principles; wear metal criteria and guidelines; concepts and application of maintenance directives; using and interpreting diagrams and technical publications; the proper handling, use, disposal of hazardous waste and materials.
The Air Force also has a creed: “I am and American Airman. I am a warrior. I have answered my nations call. I am an American Airman. My mission is to fly, fight, and win. I am faithful to a proud heritage, a tradition of honor, and a legacy of valor, I am an American airman. Guardian of freedom and justice, my nation’s sword and shield, its sentry and avenger. I defend my country with my life. I am an American airman. Wingman, leader, warrior. I will never leave an airman behind, I will never falter, and I will not fail.”
In addition to their creed, they have 3 core values: “‘Integrity first’: An Airman is a person of integrity, courage and conviction. They must be willing to control their impulses and exercise courage, honesty, and accountability in order to do what is right even when no one is looking. ‘Service Before Self’: An Airman’s professional duties take precedence over personal desires. Every Airman is expected to have the discipline to follow rules, exhibit self-control and possess respect for the beliefs, authority and worth of others. ‘Excellence all we Do’: An Airman strives for continual improvement in self and service in order to propel the Air Force further and to achieve greater accomplishment and performance for themselves and their community.
In conclusion, Aerospace Propulsion would be an excellent career choice for people looking for hands on experiences. This is a good job recomendation for young adults looking for a job but struggling to find one.

Works Cited:
Aerospace Propulsion Specialist - U.S. Air Force. Www.airforce.com, www.airforce.com/careers/maintenance-and-repair/aerospace-propulsion.
Aerospace Propulsion Specialist - U.S. Air Force. Www.airforce.com, www.airforce.com/careers/maintenance-and-repair/aerospace-propulsion.
Aerospace Propulsion. 128th Air Refueling Wing, 2020, www.128arw.ang.af.mil/About-Us/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/449968/aerospace-propulsion/ . Accessed 23 Apr. 2025.
“AEROSPACE PROPULSION.” 128th Air Refueling Wing, 2020, www.128arw.ang.af.mil/About-Us/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/449968/aerospace-propulsion/ . Accessed 23 Apr. 2025.