Question

I need tips on how to improve my poems and lyrics.
Here's one poem to see if I need any pointers:
This poem is called Fall:

We walked down the beach
When it was fall
Now all I feel is the winter's call.
You left when I was feeling down
Now all I can do is frown.
In the fall, you helped me bloom
But then came winter, and I was left on the ground free to be squished under someone's boot
Fall was the best.
Till you treated me like the rest.