does my essay look good ( its due at 12 tn )

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jinxthelovely · Answer

didnt let me put all of it...sigh..

elianabany · Answer

so far its AMAZING, i love it.

Syrnn · Answer

I would say in my opinion, to make it easier to read and hit the brain better I'd say 90% instead of 90 percent as well as 70% instead of 70 percent. It makes it more practical during reading. besides that I really liked the grammar and word choice you used, it makes it professional yet unique. my opinion, it's really good.

jinxthelovely · Answer

@syrnn wrote:

I would say in my opinion, to make it easier to read and hit the brain better I'd say 90% instead of 90 percent as well as 70% instead of 70 percent. It makes it more practical during reading. besides that I really liked the grammar and word choice you used, it makes it professional yet unique. my opinion, it's really good.

thank yu for the feed back!

Syrnn · Answer

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@syrnn wrote:

I would say in my opinion, to make it easier to read and hit the brain better I'd say 90% instead of 90 percent as well as 70% instead of 70 percent. It makes it more practical during reading. besides that I really liked the grammar and word choice you used, it makes it professional yet unique. my opinion, it's really good.

thank yu for the feed back!

anytime!

AsianPanda08 · Answer

looks good tbh, but i do agree with what Syrnn had said.