does my essay look good ( its due at 12 tn )

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jinxthelovely · Answer

didnt let me put all of it...sigh..

elianabany · Answer

so far its AMAZING, i love it.

Syrnn · Answer

I would say in my opinion, to make it easier to read and hit the brain better I'd say 90% instead of 90 percent as well as 70% instead of 70 percent. It makes it more practical during reading. besides that I really liked the grammar and word choice you used, it makes it professional yet unique. my opinion, it's really good.

jinxthelovely · Answer

@syrnn wrote:

I would say in my opinion, to make it easier to read and hit the brain better I'd say 90% instead of 90 percent as well as 70% instead of 70 percent. It makes it more practical during reading. besides that I really liked the grammar and word choice you used, it makes it professional yet unique. my opinion, it's really good.

thank yu for the feed back!

AsianPanda08 · Answer

looks good tbh, but i do agree with what Syrnn had said.

jinxthelovely · Answer

@nina001 wrote:

I like it maybe try to space it out like into sectioned paragraphs

in the google docs it is spaced out, but i had to get rid of spaces here so it would let me add more on here

adrianluvvsyouu2 · Answer

I would suggest writing in your own words instead of using AI.

This is an entirely AI-generated block of text according to GPTZero and Grammarly. To write a good essay means to use your own ideas instead of copy pasting other work.

Please don't ask for essay advice if you aren't willing to write it yourself.

adrianluvvsyouu2 · Answer

@adrianluvvsyouu2 wrote:

I would suggest writing in your own words instead of using AI. This is an entirely AI-generated block of text according to GPTZero and Grammarly. To write a good essay means to use your own ideas instead of copy pasting other work. Please don't ask for essay advice if you aren't willing to write it yourself.

It's also very obvious to any English instructor, so I advise that you make amends quickly before you get marked with a 0% and disciplinary action is taken against you