Question

What is wrong with using this sentence in a business letter?

Lots of Liberty students like to go to Pop's and think it is really cool.

here are the choices

The word "lots" and the words "really cool" are too informal.
The use of the word "Liberty" without any other information is confusing.
"Pop's" is too informal and may offend the business owner, since it is not the full name.
all of the above

Answer 1

All of the above.

Answer 2

I agree ^^

Answer 3

all of the above, the words "Pop's","lots" and the phrase "really cool" do not inflict the feeling of perfessionality.

Answer 4

Here is another question
How do you tailor an argument to SOAP in a business letter? Select all that apply.

here are the choices
through content
through style
by figuring out what you would want to hear from someone trying to convince you
none of the above

Answer 5

Aye, all of the above. A business letter ought to be easily understandable, formal and professional.

Answer 6

If you were writing a business letter, you would want to use formal language. Liberty does not tell you where the students go to school, and Pop's might offend the owner

Answer 7

All of the above, A buisness letter must be easily understandable.

Answer 8

ok thank yall

Answer 9

Pardon, SOAP? What's that mean?

Answer 10

Simple object access protocol.

Answer 11

Here is another question


How would you revise this sentence to make it more appropriate for a business proposal?

This program rocks the house.

Here are the choices
This program is fabulous.
This program does exceptional things for underprivileged children.
This program is cool.
This program totally smashes the competition.
none of the above

Answer 12

Sorry...not too sure about the SOAP one....I want to say content

This program does exceptional things for underprivileged children.

Answer 13

B.