Question

Is my sentence along with this parenthetical citation correct?

Answer 1

@arabpride

Answer 2

Duncan and his bravery in returning after slaughtering soldiers of the enemy kingdom: “And Fortune, on his damnèd quarrel smiling, Show'd like a rebel's whore. But all's too weak; For brave Macbeth (well he deserves that name) Disdaining Fortune, with his brandished steel, Which smoked with bloody execution" (1.2.16-20).

Answer 3

Here's the original text:

Answer 4

Sergeant - Doubtful it stood;
As two spent swimmers, that do cling together
And choke their art. The merciless Macdonwald—
Worthy to be a rebel, for to that
The multiplying villanies of nature
Do swarm upon him—from the western isles
Of kerns and gallowglasses is supplied;
And fortune, on his damned quarrel smiling,
Show'd like a rebel's whore: but all's too weak:
For brave Macbeth—well he deserves that name—
Disdaining fortune, with his brandish'd steel,
Which smoked with bloody execution,
Like valour's minion carved out his passage
Till he faced the slave;
Which ne'er shook hands, nor bade farewell to him,
Till he unseam'd him from the nave to the chaps,
And fix'd his head upon our battlements.

Answer 5

That looks right to me, but you might want a second opinion.

Answer 6

Hmmm... I remember my teacher saying something about omitting using colons or something?? Sound familiar?? @arabpride

Answer 7

is this for an English class?

Answer 8

Yes.

Answer 9

I honestly have never had to deal with something like this, but it looks correct, as in the articles I read online and whatnot.