Question

Elshaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Answer 1

2. Using what you have learned about evidence, explanation, quotations, and paraphrase, write your body paragraphs in the space below.
You will need to include at least one of each of the following:

• a direct quotation introduced with a complete sentence and a colon
• a direct quotation introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma
• a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence
• a paraphrased example
• an embedded quotation

Locate
3. Within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate a direct quotation that is introduced with a complete sentence and a colon. Copy and paste it here. Be sure to include the entire sentence that contains the quotation as well as the explanation sentence(s) that come after it.

4.Within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate a direct quotation that is introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma. Copy and paste it here. Be sure to include the entire sentence that contains the quotation as well as the explanation sentence(s) that come after it.

5. Within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence. Copy and paste it here.

6. Within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate one paraphrased example and copy and paste it here.

7. Within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate one embedded quotation and copy and paste it here

8. Using techniques learned in this lesson, write the conclusion to your essay in the space below.

9. How did you connect your introduction and your conclusion? (Did you use a similar technique, repetition of a significant word or phrase, etc.?) Explain.

10. Copy and paste the words or sentence that signals closure of your essay.

11.Copy and paste the sentences that synthesize your ideas. Remember, synthesis combines the main ideas of your essay AND comments on the significance of those ideas.

12. Copy and paste the sentences that answer the question from the prompt: What conclusion or implications can you draw? (It is OK if you have these sentences as a part of your synthesis or challenge to your audience. Include them here as well. It is also OK if these sentences are separate from those two elements.)

13. Copy and paste the sentences from your conclusion that challenge your audience to think, feel, or do something.

14. What are you most proud of in this draft of your body paragraphs?

15.What questions do you have about how to use examples or explanations in your writing?

Answer 2

(this is for the poem by William and the essay by John) (im getting the rest just hold on a second please e.e)

Answer 3

Okie e.e

Answer 4

Paragraph for John Muir: John Muir’s essay described that the Calypso borealis flower seemed spiritual and had a power over the human heart. He uses personification and both positive and negative tones. “It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy.” John explained that when he saw this flower he cried tears of joy because the flower just by its self made him feel like his problems were taken away. A simple look at a flower can do such a thing to a person.“It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human heart and makes you feel happy Paragraph for William wordsworth: William Wordsworth’s poem explains how looking at the flowers of nature, you can't be anything but happy. He uses personification and positive tone throughout his piece. “When all at once I saw a crowd, A host, of golden daffodils; Beside the lake, beneath the trees, Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.”William talks about seeing a crowd of daffodils and that the breeze makes them look like they're dancing. This is a personification because he is explaining that the flowers are dancing and he's comparing them to a human action.“The waves beside them danced; but they Out-did the sparkling waves in glee: A poet could not but be gay, In such a jocund company”William talks about how the waves of the breeze beside the flowers make them dance and you could not but be gay (happy). He uses a positive tone and again, personification in this because he is explaining how looking at these dancing flowers make him happy. ^^^^^ does this go for all these • a direct quotation introduced with a complete sentence and a colon • a direct quotation introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma • a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence • a paraphrased example • an embedded quotation

Answer 5

You did not add a colon. e.e

Answer 6

colon? urm can u remind meh what dat es e.e

Answer 7

\(\LARGE\bf\color{blueviolet}{:}\)

Answer 8

You can use it as a like a list or something.

`Can cause the following:`
`Example:`

Answer 9

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Answer 10

Maybe
`Wordsworth meant ............. when stated:*quotation*`

Answer 11

can you help me out with that i dont get were i would put that :

Answer 12

William Wordsworth’s poem explains how looking at the flowers of nature, you can't be anything but happy. He uses personification and positive tone throughout his piece. “When all at once I saw a crowd, A host, of golden daffodils : Beside the lake, beneath the trees, Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.”William talks about seeing a crowd of daffodils and that the breeze makes them look like they're dancing. This is a personification because he is explaining that the flowers are dancing and he's comparing them to a human action.“The waves beside them danced; but they Out-did the sparkling waves in glee: A poet could not but be gay, In such a jocund company”William talks about how the waves of the breeze beside the flowers make them dance and you could not but be gay (happy). He uses a positive tone and again, personification in this because he is explaining how looking at these dancing

Answer 13

John Muir’s essay described that the Calypso Borealis flower seemed spiritual and had a power over the human heart. He uses personification and both positive and negative tones: “It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy.”

Answer 14

oHHHHHH thats how u use demmmm

Answer 15

I tink. e.e

Answer 16

so you use them before every quote

Answer 17

Not every quote. e.e
Pfftt
Just to help your fact.

Like `Personification` hooks up with the quote.
Make sense? e.e
Prolleh not.

Answer 18

I have one question.
Do the requirements follow for both paragraphs?

Answer 19

yes both paragraphs have to have all requirements

Answer 20

Fudge. ;-;

Answer 21

Paragraph for John Muir: John Muir’s essay described that the Calypso borealis flower seemed spiritual and had a power over the human heart. He uses personification and both positive and negative tones.: “It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy.:” John explained that when he saw this flower he cried tears of joy because the flower just by its self made him feel like his problems were taken away. A simple look at a flower can do such a thing to a person.“It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human heart and makes you feel happy

William Wordsworth’s poem explains how looking at the flowers of nature, you can't be anything but happy. He uses personification and positive tone throughout his piece.: “When all at once I saw a crowd, A host, of golden daffodils Beside the lake, beneath the trees, Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.”William talks about seeing a crowd of daffodils and that the breeze makes them look like they're dancing. This is a personification because he is explaining that the flowers are dancing and he's comparing them to a human action.:“The waves beside them danced; but they Out-did the sparkling waves in glee: A poet could not but be gay, In such a jocund company”William talks about how the waves of the breeze beside the flowers make them dance and you could not but be gay (happy). He uses a positive tone and again, personification in this because he is explaining how looking at these dancing

Answer 22

^^like dis

Answer 23

Wai is der a period before the colon? o.e

Answer 24

bc its the end of da sentence

Answer 25

ill remove it

Answer 26

o.e

Answer 27

Paragraph for John Muir: John Muir’s essay described that the Calypso borealis flower seemed spiritual and had a power over the human heart. He uses personification and both positive and negative tones: “It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy:” John explained that when he saw this flower he cried tears of joy because the flower just by its self made him feel like his problems were taken away. A simple look at a flower can do such a thing to a person.“It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human heart and makes you feel happy

William Wordsworth’s poem explains how looking at the flowers of nature, you can't be anything but happy. He uses personification and positive tone throughout his piece: “When all at once I saw a crowd, A host, of golden daffodils Beside the lake, beneath the trees, Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.”William talks about seeing a crowd of daffodils and that the breeze makes them look like they're dancing. This is a personification because he is explaining that the flowers are dancing and he's comparing them to a human action:“The waves beside them danced; but they Out-did the sparkling waves in glee: A poet could not but be gay, In such a jocund company”William talks about how the waves of the breeze beside the flowers make them dance and you could not but be gay (happy). He uses a positive tone and again, personification in this because he is explaining how looking at these dancing

Answer 28

Okayy
Let's work on one paragraph first.

John Muir’s essay described that the Calypso Borealis flower seemed spiritual and had a power over the human heart. He uses personification and both positive and negative tones: “It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy:” John explained that when he saw this flower he cried tears of joy because the lonely, beautiful flower made him feel like his problems were taken away. A simple look at a flower can do such a thing to a person.“It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human heart and makes you feel happy

\(\small\bf\cancel{•~a~direct~quotation~introduced~with~a~complete~sentence~and~a~colon}\)
• a direct quotation introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma
• a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence
• a paraphrased example
• an embedded quotation

Answer 29

Okay.
Do you know what a signaling phrase is?

Answer 30

Its a sentence that leads up to a quotation

Answer 31

am i correct

Answer 32

Ehh

It's introducing the quote creator and his mood.

Example:

` "There is no end" argued Bert.`

`argued Bert ` is the signaling phrase.

Answer 33

ok.

Answer 34

so what would the signal phrase be in this I sat down beside it and fairly cried
signal phrase: i sat?

Answer 35

Nonono
“It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human heart and makes you feel happy," writes Muir.

`writes Muir` is the signaling phrase.

Answer 36

so i have to add that

Answer 37

ok give me a second

Answer 38

John Muir’s essay described that the Calypso Borealis flower seemed spiritual and had a power over the human heart. He uses personification and both positive and negative tones: “It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy:” John explained that when he saw this flower he cried tears of joy because the lonely, beautiful flower made him feel like his problems were taken away. A simple look at a flower can do such a thing to a person.“It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human heart and makes you feel happy" writes Muir

Answer 39

so if that finishes
∙ a direct quotation introduced with a complete sentence and a colon<done
• a direct quotation introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma<done
• a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence
• a paraphrased example
• an embedded quotation

Answer 40

You need to add another quotation to complete the third step.

Answer 41

step three confuses meh

Answer 42

Get a quote and explain what the author means in that quote ONLY in one sentence.

Answer 43

"when the sun was getting low and everything seemed most bewildering and discouraging, I found beautiful Calypso on the mossy bank" The author explains when the sun was going down it seemed discouraging but when he saw the calypso and it sparked hope into his heart.

Answer 44

Good. ^.^

Answer 45

John Muir’s essay described that the Calypso Borealis flower seemed spiritual and had a power over the human heart. He uses personification and both positive and negative tones: “It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy:” John explained that when he saw this flower he cried tears of joy because the lonely, beautiful flower made him feel like his problems were taken away. A simple look at a flower can do such a thing to a person.“It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human heart and makes you feel happy" writes Muir"when the sun was getting low and everything seemed most bewildering and discouraging, I found beautiful Calypso on the mossy bank" The author explains when the sun was going down it seemed discouraging but when he saw the calypso and it sparked hope into his heart.

Answer 46

Mhm. c:

Answer 47

a direct quotation introduced with a complete sentence and a colon<done
• a direct quotation introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma<done
• a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence<done
• a paraphrased example
• an embedded quotation

Answer 48

Okie okie okie
Now paraphrasing example. e.e

Answer 49

paraphrasing example hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Answer 50

`Examples of Paraphrasing. Paraphrasing involves taking a set of facts or opinions and rewording them. When paraphrasing, it is important to keep the original meaning and to present it in a new form. Basically, you are simply writing something in your own words that expresses the original idea.`

Answer 51

so the main idea is both the authors admire nature in the same was but write there opinion down in different ways

Answer 52

"there opinion"

Answer 53

both the authors admire nature in the same was but write their opinion down in different ways

Answer 54

Ye.

Answer 55

John Muir’s essay described that the Calypso Borealis flower seemed spiritual and had a power over the human heart. He uses personification and both positive and negative tones: “It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy:” John explained that when he saw this flower he cried tears of joy because the lonely, beautiful flower made him feel like his problems were taken away. A simple look at a flower can do such a thing to a person.“It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human heart and makes you feel happy" writes Muir"when the sun was getting low and everything seemed most bewildering and discouraging, I found beautiful Calypso on the mossy bank" The author explains when the sun was going down it seemed discouraging but when he saw the calypso and it sparked hope into his heart. both the authors admire nature in the same was but write their opinion down in different ways

Answer 56

Yerp. e.e

Answer 57

a direct quotation introduced with a complete sentence and a colon<done
• a direct quotation introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma<done
• a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence<done
• a paraphrased example<done
• an embedded quotation

Answer 58

Last juan @.@

Answer 59

for paragraph juan T~T

Answer 60

Fudge ;-;

Answer 61

embedded quote?

Answer 62

`Anembedded quote flows naturally into your own writing. When reading a well-embedded quote, it should sound like part of your own sentence.A dropped-in quote does not flow with the rest of the sentence. It sounds jarring and disrupts the sentence and paragraph. 5.`

Answer 63

ok but i dont get what it is exactly

Answer 64

Neither do I, rip. e.e

Answer 65

@AngeI e.e

Answer 66

lets try elsha's technique

Answer 67

Eh? e.e

Answer 68

@AngeI HELP ELSHA IS IN TROUBLE

Answer 69

x'D elsha clickbait

Answer 70

Oof e.e

Answer 71

Rip
didn't come. <\3

@umm e.e

Answer 72

T~T

Answer 73

Angellllllllllll <3

Answer 74

Too much reading e.e
What dew yew need halp with Elsha & Anime?

Answer 75

what exactly is a embedded quote? neither of us know

Answer 76

I myself don't know..I just looked it up, and it comes with what Elsa's already put up.

Answer 77

How am i suppose to add it if i done know T~T ill go see if its anywere in my notes

Answer 78

So I found this, I don't know if it will or won't help much though.
~ http://languageartsteachers.com/embeddedquotes/

Answer 79

Strategies for Embedding Quotations
There are three strategies you can use to embed quotations: set off quotations, build in
quotations, or introduce quotations with a colon.

Answer 80

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AnimeGhoul8863
Strategies for Embedding Quotations
There are three strategies you can use to embed quotations: set off quotations, build in
quotations, or introduce quotations with a colon.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
^^^Introduce quotations with a colon We did that didnt we

Answer 81

@Elsa213

Answer 82

Ye
For Muir.

Answer 83

ok now Wordsworth

Answer 84

William Wordsworth’s poem explains how looking at the flowers of nature, you can't be anything but happy. He uses personification and positive tone throughout his piece: “When all at once I saw a crowd, A host, of golden daffodils Beside the lake, beneath the trees, Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.”William talks about seeing a crowd of daffodils and that the breeze makes them look like they're dancing. This is a personification because he is explaining that the flowers are dancing and he's comparing them to a human action:“The waves beside them danced; but they Out-did the sparkling waves in glee: A poet could not but be gay, In such a jocund company”William talks about how the waves of the breeze beside the flowers make them dance and you could not but be gay (happy). He uses a positive tone and again, personification in this because he is explaining how looking at these dancing

Answer 85

Mai butt hurts. e.e

Answer 86

Das gewd doe.

Answer 87

really cause we didnt redo any of it

Answer 88

Rip e.e
Butt der essa colon tingeh der.

Answer 89

a direct quotation introduced with a complete sentence and a colon
• a direct quotation introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma
• a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence
• a paraphrased example
• an embedded quotation
So it has colon, signaling phrase,quotation introduced and explained, paraphrased example,

Answer 90

Yeeee

Answer 91

ok thank you den

Answer 92

WE FORGOT DA QUESTIONSSSSSSS

Answer 93

T~T IM NEVER GONNA GET DIS DONEEEEE *cries*

Answer 94

Der are questions? o.e

Answer 95

Locate
3. Within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate a direct quotation that is introduced with a complete sentence and a colon. Copy and paste it here. Be sure to include the entire sentence that contains the quotation as well as the explanation sentence(s) that come after it.

4.Within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate a direct quotation that is introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma. Copy and paste it here. Be sure to include the entire sentence that contains the quotation as well as the explanation sentence(s) that come after it.

5. Within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence. Copy and paste it here.

6. Within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate one paraphrased example and copy and paste it here.

7. Within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate one embedded quotation and copy and paste it here

8. Using techniques learned in this lesson, write the conclusion to your essay in the space below.

9. How did you connect your introduction and your conclusion? (Did you use a similar technique, repetition of a significant word or phrase, etc.?) Explain.

10. Copy and paste the words or sentence that signals closure of your essay.

11.Copy and paste the sentences that synthesize your ideas. Remember, synthesis combines the main ideas of your essay AND comments on the significance of those ideas.

12. Copy and paste the sentences that answer the question from the prompt: What conclusion or implications can you draw? (It is OK if you have these sentences as a part of your synthesis or challenge to your audience. Include them here as well. It is also OK if these sentences are separate from those two elements.)

13. Copy and paste the sentences from your conclusion that challenge your audience to think, feel, or do something.

14. What are you most proud of in this draft of your body paragraphs?

15.What questions do you have about how to use examples or explanations in your writing?

Answer 96

T~T

Answer 97

Oh
Hail
Naw

Answer 98

bye elsa imma go kill my self and figure da answers thx for ur help

Answer 99

Rip ;-;
Google du title of du assignment
Der are always Prezi stuffz yew can use as an example.

Answer 100

nah i dont wanna get caught for plagiarism ill just figure it out

Answer 101

Use it as an example.
Don't copy it. e.e

Answer 102

For the conclusion does this sound ok @Elsa213


In conclusion Both authors are different but similar in other ways. Both Pieces made me look at nature in a different way and made me think of flowers more than there just colorful but that they have a way with people you just have to look close enough. Again Both authors have the same feeling over nature but find that feeling in different ways They both talk positive about nature and how beautiful it is and happy it makes a person. So next time if your outside and see flowers or trees really look close and see the beauty it has and how it make your heart warm and happy.

Answer 103

Ooooooo *-*
Goodie. ^.^
Do yew need help wif du grammar?

Answer 104

if thats ok with yew

Answer 105

In conclusion, both authors are different but similar in other ways. Both writings made me look at nature from a different perspective and made me think of flowers more than just colorful, but they have a way with people, you just have to look close enough. Again, both authors have the same feeling of nature but find that feeling in different ways They both talk positive about nature, explaining how beautiful it is and how happy it makes a person. So next time if your outside and see flowers or trees really look close and see the beauty it has and how it makes your heart warm and happy.