Question

essay help

Answer 1

Sometimes you think you have your life together; you believe that you know your calling. Maybe you are questioning your purpose or do not understand the entire reasoning behind that purpose. Ask yourself this, “What annoys you? Go and change it.”
Here is my conclusion
I need better word choice but it is def inspirational

Answer 2

@Shadow

Answer 3

Yeah "What annoys you" can definitely be reworded, perhaps..."What troubles you in the world?"

Answer 4

but that is what he said

Answer 5

had he worded it that way, I don't know if that would have had the same effect

Answer 6

Everyone has a calling in life. It may not always be recognized, but when it does you ask yourself, why didn’t I think of this sooner? For years, I thought that I was meant for the science department. From veterinary medicine to pathology, I was determined to work in laboratory research for the rest of my life. However, that changed after graduation.
After a series of lackluster speeches, a young man strode onto the platform with a confidence that bespoke a message worth listening to. He begins explaining the five themes of life: goals, changing the world, purpose,
The most important question he asked was “what annoys you?’ I contemplated for a while on my decided major. I could not conclude a response. I was amused by the idea of studying horrific biopsies and I loved research; however, it was not enough to become my career. I keep thinking and jokingly told my friends “Based on this speech, I should be an English Education major.”
Sometimes you think you have your life together; you believe that you know your calling. Maybe you are questioning your purpose or do not understand the entire reasoning behind that purpose. Ask yourself this, “What annoys you? Go and change it.”

Answer 7

I'm still writing but here's what I have so far

Answer 8

Honestly it's one of those statements that sounds different based on how you hear it. So hearing it in person as you did in the speech is quite different to how I perceived it just now.

Answer 9

In retrospect, it's fine I suppose.

Answer 10

and remember a younger audience

Answer 11

Everyone has a calling in life. It may not always be recognized, but when it does you ask yourself, why didn’t I think of this sooner? For years, I thought that I was meant for the science department. From veterinary medicine to pathology, I was determined to work in laboratory research for the rest of my life. However, that changed after graduation.
After a series of lackluster speeches, a young man strode onto the platform with a confidence that bespoke a message worth listening to. He begins explaining the five themes of life: goals, changing the world, purpose, journeys, and follow your passion.

Answer 12

what could I add so far?

Answer 13

I do need sensory details

Answer 14

after *highschool* graduation

Answer 15

Without clarifying, I could assume it's elementary, middleschool, heck maybe preschool?

Answer 16

Another change: *following* your passion

Answer 17

You want it to parallel the structure you already set up with: 'changing the world'

Answer 18

majors and life ? how can you assume that

Answer 19

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Answer 20

science department and careers? Do I need to clarify?

Answer 21

I was referring to this sentence: "However, that changed after graduation."

You ought to detail what graduation it specifically was. These are the kinds of details that allows the reader to build an image in their mind. Right now they don't know what picture to build. 90% will assume high school, but 10% like me will find it odd.

Answer 22

I think the detail you have elsewhere is fine.

Answer 23

It's just that particular section that's odd. You see, writing to me is world building. When you write high school graduation, every reader will picture a crowd of near adults, and parents in the background. This is the typical understanding of a high school graduation. But then the readers own experiences will flood into the world, because they know that you're talking about a hs graduation, and they know of one. It allows for worlds to meld, making it a story that a reader becomes personally invested in.

Answer 24

Everyone has a calling in life. It may not always be recognized, but when it is, you ask yourself, why didn’t I think of this sooner? For years, I thought that I was meant for the science department. From veterinary medicine to pathology, I was determined to work in laboratory research for the rest of my life. However, that changed after high school graduation.

Answer 25

Reflecting on my high school experience, I realized my struggle in math. Barely surviving calculus,

Answer 26

You realized that it wasn't for you, that there were areas where your expertise truly resided.

Answer 27

wait what?

Answer 28

I'm just giving you my interpretation of what you said, and also perhaps where you might go

Answer 29

I need sensory details to describe calculus

Answer 30

I only ever went up to precalc, but to be honest, giving sensory details to math, kind of hilarious

Answer 31

Just the thought of it

Answer 32

go ahead lol

Answer 33

Perhaps taxing on the brain, arduous at every corner, etc

Answer 34

Everyone has a calling in life. It may not always be recognized, but when it is, you ask yourself, why didn’t I think of this sooner? For years, I thought that I was meant for the science department. From veterinary medicine to pathology, I was determined to work in laboratory research for the rest of my life. However, that changed after high school graduation.
After a series of lackluster speeches, a young man strode onto the platform with a confidence that bespoke a message worth listening to. He begins by explaining the five themes of life: goals, changing the world, purpose, journeys, and following your passion.
The most important question he asked was “what annoys you?’ I contemplated for a while on my decided major. I could not conclude a response. I was amused by the idea of studying horrific biopsies and I loved research; however, it was not enough to become my career. I keep thinking and jokingly told my friends “Based on this speech, I should be an English Education major.”
For a couple of weeks, I contemplated the possibility of changing my major. Reflecting on my high school experience, I realized my struggle in math. Barely surviving calculus, an abundance of tears,

Answer 35

An abundance of tears, sweat, and glory that felt short lived.

Answer 36

Akin to just getting by that one math quiz, when you know the test is right around the corner.

Answer 37

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Akin to just getting by that one math quiz, when you know the test is right around the corner.
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Answer 38

Just random thoughts (: Keep going

Answer 39

After a series of lackluster speeches, a young man strode onto the platform with a confidence that bespoke a message worth listening to. He begins by explaining the five themes of life: goals, changing the world, purpose, journeys, and following your passion.
What should I add?

Answer 40

I'm not sure, I wasn't there. Primarily you want to focus on what caught your attention, and what you got out of the speech.

Answer 41

That's all I can say.

Answer 42

okay cool

Answer 43

After a series of lackluster speeches, a young man strode onto the platform with a confidence that bespoke a message worth listening to. He begins by explaining the five themes of life: goals, changing the world, purpose, journeys, and following your passion. Knowing your goals involves your aspirations, your future career. Those will help you with changing the world.

Answer 44

@Vocaloid