Question

can somebody reword this

From the very beginning, the narrator was attempting to convince the reader that he was not crazy although he was bothered by his neighbor's eye. The pace of the storyline began with the narrator admitting how he had a bad feeling whenever the old man's vulgar eye looked at the narrator, but he didn't think that the narrator was crazy about it. Soon enough, throughout the story, the narrator is driven crazy by the vulture's eyes on the old man and decides to kill the old man. But from the reader's perspective, it seems to look like the narrator was crazy and did not think so. The narrator had planned very meticulously over the thought of killing and acted out on it. Once the deed was done, the police came by to check because a neighbor reported suspicious activity at the old man's home. The narrator lets the police into the house to search for it and the narrator explains how the old man went to visit a friend out in the country and the police believed him. But the narrator's guilt got to him and put him on edge. He behaved more and more suspiciously and finally let a cry out about admitting to killing the man because the narrator thought the policemen were on to him. The way that the mood affected me was that the narrator had begun to admit that he was a normal person, perfectly fine. But once the narrator put out the exposition, it started to give out the expression that he was crazy and his denying that he wasn't crazy made the narrator even more suspicious. To conclude my claim, I see that the narrator is genuinely crazy and that even though he convinced himself and attempted to prove to the reader he wasn't crazy, in the end, he was.

Answer 1

It looks like your trying to reword someone elses answer?